Bill Bennett

Bill Bennett

Can you start sentence with “And”?

At school we were taught never to start sentences with “And”.

And yet newspaper journalists do it all the time. Not starting a sentence with “and” is one of the first so-called rules professional writers learn to break.

There’s nothing wrong with using “and” to begin a sentence or a paragraph. It is a great way to smooth the flow when you have a series of short sentences that would otherwise be too staccato for comfortable reading.

Only break this rule in moderation. Overusing “And” at the start of sentences quickly becomes boring.

As Keith Waterhouse points out in Daily Mirror Style, too many sentences starting with the word means your writing reads like the New English Bible.

Aim for only one “And” sentence start in a short piece of 300 words. For longer stories, you can get away with using it a few times – about once every 3-500 words. Control any urge to sprinkle sentences starting with “And” through your copy.

Other conjunctions

The school rule didn’t just apply to “And”, starting sentences with other conjunctions was also forbidden. As an aside, conjunctions are ‘joining’ words used to string phrases together – usually, but not always, to build more complex sentences.

There are plenty of alternative conjunctions to call on at the start of your sentences:

“But” is a great way to start a sentence that disagrees with the previous one. “Yet” is a less-frequently used alternative. “Or” is a great word for helping text flow. Some people don’t like sentences to start with “However”. That’s another rule worth breaking. “Although” is a possibility. In practice, it can be better to shorten the word to “Though” at the start of a sentence.

Joshua Leung
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Heh... It's funny - I've only ever heard about this first one, but none of the others (which I use heavily)

The only additional constraint I don't see listed anywhere that I personally followed for years was:
Don't start sentences with the same word / phrase, unless doing it for effect.

In retrospect, it may have contributed a bit to my severe writer's block at times... and I did loosen it a bit towards the end of thesis writing to get things done. But I still largely keep it now

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EDIT:
Actually, "Don't" should have been "Never"

And the exclusion zone stretched from sentences within a paragraph, to consecutive paragraphs in a section.

Comparing sections though... yeah, it doesn't matter by that point. No one can tell once you get to that point, as most folk read from start to end, not jump around, so, meh...

Bill Bennett
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@aligorith Yes, that’s a rule that’s worth observing, (for complex reasons) which means cutting down on starting sentence with “the”.

Richard Hulse
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@billbennett I would often put however in the middle of a sentence, however I stopped doing that for a while when editors started making a new sentence starting with however.

Carl B. Latro
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@billbennett I do it all the time. And proud of it! :)